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တတိယေျမာက္လမ္း

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1. 28-04-2009 20:15

good

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2. 28-04-2009 16:42

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Revolution can see quick result and that's why some are in favour of that. Evolution may take longer to see the tangible outcome. But, I'd choose that as I can't afford to sacrifice my fellow friends, brothers and sisters anymore.

Thank you for your feedback jj. I appreciate that. Sorry for my late reply

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3. 28-04-2009 16:39

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So long as we burmese are happy and enjoying their lives as much as people from other developed nations do, it doesn't matter whether we are called "socialist", "communist", "democrats", "aristocrats" or "autocrats". We are one of the countries in "bottom billion" and trapped in many ways more than everyone could imagine. Simply put.. I urged not to point finger and see one another as enemies for we may end up in ground zero.

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4. 28-04-2009 16:35

Reply to JJ (1 of 3)

There's no giving in or giving up. Let's use the word "compromise" here. We've gotta find out the common objectives and we've got to learn "agree to disagree". I'm not saying to vow one party to another. Instead, i'm merely highlighting the facts that it's the burmese who are losing ground if both parties can't build the trust to one another. I'm afraid to say We don't need "Heroes" but "leaders". Undoubtfully, we need leaders who could breakthrough the bottleneck that has been stucked for decad

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k loon

5. 22-04-2009 08:58

good reflection

good reflection on how we all feel, bro.. however, the ending sounds a little too soft.. sounds like giving in or giving up.. if we know that's a trap, we should avoid it as much as we can, dont u agree? i know heroes walk into traps knowingly if the situation calls.. but walking into a known trap with no plan is as good as suicide... just sharing wat came into my mind after reading ur poem..

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